Dotun

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This is Orimisan from my quick pose archives.

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This is Orimisan from my quick pose archives.

comments (23)

Dotun, good work.

Love the red, it's the most prominent part of the shot.
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Jide, I am glad you like it.
I like the soft framing here.
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Big A!
Hi Dotun,
nice blur effect, it's very cool..but she's should more smile wink
Regards
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Dudee, it looks like she was following my instructions not to smile too wide smile I am glad you like it.
  • P.J.
  • 18 Dec 2006, 04:10
Interesting effect to the shot. Good portrait.
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks PJ, glad you like it.
  • sk
  • Great Britain (UK)
  • 18 Dec 2006, 06:32
nice portrait Dotun
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Asiko!
Dotun nice framing. I like the pping. smile
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Sarthak, I like the framing too.
  • Louis
  • 18 Dec 2006, 11:04
This is a great shot and presentation. Love it.
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Loius, glad you like.
  • david
  • hemel hempstead, sadly!
  • 18 Dec 2006, 12:51
really good shot - i like this!
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks David, I am glad you like.
I think that you have had left the treatment very pretty
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Jose!
  • Ginnie
  • United States
  • 18 Dec 2006, 14:48
What a great professional shot, Dotun. Wow! You could make a business of this! smile
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks for encouragement Ginnie.
Nice pp, interested in seeing the other poses in the series smile
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Dami, I will put up some more next year when I get to process them.
  • Mal
  • 18 Dec 2006, 16:17
Can't fault it Dee! I really like it. Mal
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Mal!
  • chris p
  • Great Britain (UK)
  • 18 Dec 2006, 18:44
Fine work Dotun.
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks for visiting Chris.
  • Abi
  • Great Britain (UK)
  • 18 Dec 2006, 18:56
very nice shot
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Abi, glad you like.
Hiya Dotun. The photograph is in itself wonderful, including the soft focus and shallow DOF. The only part I don't like, is the white frame. I can't say too much, as you have gone green, although I would like to offer some crit. Anyhow, it is a very good picture. Well done D. Kindest regards, Neil.
Dotun Ayodeji: Thanks Neil, next time don't worry about the green mood, sometimes I don't even remember to set a mood. So please leave your honest critique or opinion as usual because I always like to know what others see. As for the frame, or I will call it vignetting, I chose that effect to draw the viewers eye to the subject rather than the sorroundings, I know some folks will like it and some will not. I have also learnt that vignetting or soft edges can improve most images and I think it works here.
Nice portrait Dotun, very soft, tender like this youg woman seems to be...
  • Peter Adeyemo
  • Munich, Germany
  • 18 Dec 2006, 21:49
Gorgeous young lady having a cute pose meets a professional artist with great sense of photography at crossroads => Original masterpiece wink lol.
BTW, I see some "crosspath/road" in the background amidst the blur wink
  • Ellie
  • 18 Dec 2006, 23:18
A lovely image Dotun, you've done the lady proud. I hope she has a copy of this to put on the wall. smile
Nice portrait, the colors really go together well. I would just try to avoid that the upper rim of her glasses passes sits directly in front of her eyes. Makes it a bit hard to get "eye-contact".

I think the vignetting really could work, but maybe using a darker color? the whites might be a bit too strong for the muted, autumn-like colors of the actual picture.
  • adewale
  • london
  • 19 Dec 2006, 14:53
omo no mind anythin joo,dem mama fine reach u?over buff stuvs.
  • osi
  • uk
  • 19 Dec 2006, 15:25
Good work D! Picture pulls off the differnt shades of contrast and colour!! Although the model carries most of the credit for giving your work a voice, happy holdiays.let yours truly know when you need a uk agent 50:50 split

Peace out
  • saheed
  • 20 Dec 2006, 07:47
lookin real good sis.
  • AirBete
  • Canada
  • 20 Dec 2006, 13:33
Nice postprocessing. Nice pose too!

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